Kate, I really love this background, too, but it makes it really hard to focus on the pictures you post. Better for a blog that is all text. You have missed some of the requires criteria so the mark is low for this one. Your images are good and the edits seem to be fine. You've not been really clear about what you did (ie, which b&w is increased contrast, specifically how did you 'play with the colours) and you've not made any comments on what you see as the difference. That part is important because that is where I get a sense of whether you are aware of why you are doing what you are doing - which is the learning part of it. Make specific reference to details in the images and make judgments as to whether those details make a strong or weak picture. Let me know what you think and feel about what you see. Anyway, easy fixes for the next post. Oh, and try to get them all on one post. If you are not finished all parts of a multi-part assignment just save and continue rather than publishing after each section. 6/12
Kate, I really love this background, too, but it makes it really hard to focus on the pictures you post. Better for a blog that is all text. You have missed some of the requires criteria so the mark is low for this one. Your images are good and the edits seem to be fine. You've not been really clear about what you did (ie, which b&w is increased contrast, specifically how did you 'play with the colours) and you've not made any comments on what you see as the difference. That part is important because that is where I get a sense of whether you are aware of why you are doing what you are doing - which is the learning part of it. Make specific reference to details in the images and make judgments as to whether those details make a strong or weak picture. Let me know what you think and feel about what you see. Anyway, easy fixes for the next post. Oh, and try to get them all on one post. If you are not finished all parts of a multi-part assignment just save and continue rather than publishing after each section. 6/12
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